First narrative essay

MEAN OF HOLIDAY

Holiday is the most likely day in our life. People usually use this day both for relaxation and looking for happiness¹. They also used to spend their time either for visiting some tour places such as; beach and mountain³ or stay together with their family². For me, it was different for my last holiday because I spend my holiday with my friends at around my homestay.

We were at a coffee shop in the first day that it was our national holiday for Hindustani. It was in the morning. In there, we sat together and we usually make a joke there⁴. We used to laughed and screamed⁵ together so loudly because of our jokes. It made our relationship become closer each other. In front of the shop, we looked how beautiful rice field was. It looks both so green and so fresh⁶ which can made our feeling so peace. In there, we also had the best view of Kawi Mountain. It was an enjoyable time sitting at there.

In the second day, we were so confused what we were going to do. We just stayed at homestay and just watching some movies, but I had a good idea. I planned to play football. I sent some messages to my other friends. In the afternoon, we started to play football in the campus field. We released all of our weary in studying with this activity. We often play football in daily activity but I felt, it was different because there was no something that bothering us. We played very enjoyable. We felt very satisfy and happy⁷ that day.

I hope you can realize that spend our holiday, not only visiting some tour places or stay together with our family, but also we can be fun to spend our holiday with our friends⁸. You should be glad with our situation whenever we are.

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1.      Both…and… : parallel between noun and noun

2.      Either…or… : parallel between clause and clause

3.      And : parallel between noun and noun

4.      And : parallel between clause and clause

5.      And : parallel between verb and verb

6.      And : parallel between adjective and adjective

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8.      Not only…but also…: parallel between clause and clause